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Writing your own story · 06

Hooks

How your story starts: the opening scene for the AI and your readers, written by you or by the AI.

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Hooks are how your story starts. A hook sets the scene for the AI and for your readers.

Title and description

Start with a title and a description. Together they give readers a quick preview of what each hook involves.

The shrine stepsHe has been waiting a while, and does not mind.
The night marketThe stalls open at midnight, and someone is selling your name.
A new arrival AI writes itA fresh opening, written for you when you start.
Bold line is the titleLine below is the description
Example: what readers see when they pick a hook

Writing the opening

Try not to speak for your readers in your opening scene. It also helps the AI avoid speaking for their character later on. End with something that gives their character clear room to act.

Speaks for the reader
{{user}} gasps and runs up the shrine steps, heart pounding. {{They}} decide to trust him. Kirimori smiles as {{they}} reach the top.
Decides what the reader feels and does, and ends with nothing left for them to choose.
Leaves room to act
Footsteps sound on the shrine steps behind {{user}}. At the top, Kirimori lowers his lantern and studies {{them}} for a long moment.

"You came back," he says. "Are you staying this time?"
Sets the scene, then ends on a question the reader gets to answer.
Example: two ways to open the same scene

The reader's name and pronouns

To insert the reader's name, write {{user}}. To insert their pronouns, write the they/them form in double braces, and it's replaced with the pronouns they chose for their Star.

You writeShe/herHe/himThey/them
{{user}}Their Star's name
{{they}}shehethey
{{them}}herhimthem
{{their}}herhistheir
{{theirs}}hershistheirs
{{themself}}herselfhimselfthemself
Placeholders and what they become
Tips
  • Start the placeholder with a capital to start a sentence: {{They}} becomes "She", "He", or "They".
  • Write sentences where the verb works for every reader. "{{They}} walked in" reads correctly for everyone; "{{they}} walks in" doesn't for they/them.
  • Readers who haven't chosen pronouns, or who play one of your cast, get they/them.

Multiple hooks

You can create more than one hook, so readers can choose between different openings. Hooks can start in different locations, at different times, or from different perspectives. Try a few different openings to see what you like.

If you have story headers turned on and use more than one hook, you can set the starting time and location for each hook. Learn more about story headers.

Day 1Evening

The shrine

The stone steps
The shrine stepsArrive as the lanterns are lit.
Day 1Night

The village

The night market
The night marketStart in the middle of a crowd.
Day 4Morning

The shrine

The inner hall
Three days laterStart after the bargain is made.
Example: three hooks, each with its own starting header

Let the AI write it

Your other option is to let the AI write the opening for each reader. Give the AI a direction and a vibe, and it writes a new hook every time someone starts your story. You choose this separately for each hook, under How it opens.

Vibe & instructions

Quiet and eerie. Open at dusk on the shrine steps, with Kirimori already waiting. End by giving {{user}} a choice to make.

A new opening for each reader

Reader oneThe last lantern flickers on as you reach the top step…
Reader twoSnow has gathered on the shrine gate, untouched except for one set of prints…
Example: one set of instructions, a different opening each time

Keep reading

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Locations

The big areas of your world, and how the story knows where it is.

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Story headers

Layouts, the starting scene, and points and meters.