Writing your own story · 06
Hooks
How your story starts: the opening scene for the AI and your readers, written by you or by the AI.
Hooks are how your story starts. A hook sets the scene for the AI and for your readers.
Title and description
Start with a title and a description. Together they give readers a quick preview of what each hook involves.
Writing the opening
Try not to speak for your readers in your opening scene. It also helps the AI avoid speaking for their character later on. End with something that gives their character clear room to act.
{{user}} gasps and runs up the shrine steps, heart pounding. {{They}} decide to trust him. Kirimori smiles as {{they}} reach the top.Decides what the reader feels and does, and ends with nothing left for them to choose.Footsteps sound on the shrine steps behind {{user}}. At the top, Kirimori lowers his lantern and studies {{them}} for a long moment.
"You came back," he says. "Are you staying this time?"Sets the scene, then ends on a question the reader gets to answer.The reader's name and pronouns
To insert the reader's name, write {{user}}. To insert their pronouns, write the they/them form in double braces, and it's replaced with the pronouns they chose for their Star.
| You write | She/her | He/him | They/them |
|---|---|---|---|
{{user}} | Their Star's name | ||
{{they}} | she | he | they |
{{them}} | her | him | them |
{{their}} | her | his | their |
{{theirs}} | hers | his | theirs |
{{themself}} | herself | himself | themself |
Multiple hooks
You can create more than one hook, so readers can choose between different openings. Hooks can start in different locations, at different times, or from different perspectives. Try a few different openings to see what you like.
If you have story headers turned on and use more than one hook, you can set the starting time and location for each hook. Learn more about story headers.
Let the AI write it
Your other option is to let the AI write the opening for each reader. Give the AI a direction and a vibe, and it writes a new hook every time someone starts your story. You choose this separately for each hook, under How it opens.
Vibe & instructions
Quiet and eerie. Open at dusk on the shrine steps, with Kirimori already waiting. End by giving {{user}} a choice to make.A new opening for each reader

